Poem -
One Of Many
We are one of many vessels,
Moulded from earths life clay.
Wise teachings soon discovered,
All to guide us on our way.
Crafted by the Potter's hands,
Pieced together with loving care.
Gifted with a beating heart,
And a soul to always share.
We will stumble we will fall,
But determined to venture on.
Life's journey long and winding,
Arriving in a new lights dawn.
We are vessels oh so fragile,
Of human form all impressed.
Return to Him we are destined,
In His hands each soul at rest.
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Comments
Need that softened heart in the living water for Him to have something to work with! great write!................................Jim
Jim, many thanks and will continue tomorrow.
And on a personal note, thank you for your heartfelt concern, for that means a lot to me.
Hi Shaun, did you write the poem about two dead boys got up to fight? I memorized that poem in the late 80’s/1990/91 in grade school. Just wondering when it was written. Great poem!
Thanks,
Ken
What lovely work Shaun, wish I could find calm waters like you. Kind regards, your friend Max
Max, many and mucho thanks my friend and I have a lot of catching up to do and will redouble my efforts and get my Welsh butt in gear and start reading and commenting on your latest.😱
Your friend Shaun and also kind regards.
Awww thanks, Shaun, your really kind, but reading your poems make my day!
Max its always a pleasure and I'll try to put a WW2 poem up soon or maybe a war related narrative poem.
I have a few older , dark poems, ones I might put up tomorrow called The Quest and the other is called Pandora's Jar Part 1 of 2 both are really visceral and dark supernatural narrative adventure poems.
And really need to wrap up Archangel Trilogy for good for Tony Taylor.
I'll see what's in my scribbles and personal message you tomorrow to let you know, just been out of the poetry picture for a while.
But all is now good.
Thanks again Max and kind regards good sir.
I look forward to it!!!
Wow SHAUN!!.......VERY relatable subject matter for ALL who have some kind of FAITH.....delivered with perfect timing and beautifully chosen words making up phrasing that resonates within its A,B.A,B rhyme scheme.....ALL STARS!!......ALWAYS a pleasure to read your stuff my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Tony many thanks for your kind comments and as I said to Max I have a lot of catching up to do on members poems and yours too my friend.
And will finish off that Archangel Trilogy dedicated to your good self in sooner time rather than later and when fully wrapped will send you a personal message before upping it.
So tomorrow I'll make inroads to your latest and I'm sure wonderful and engaging poetry, for you write with great honesty and aplomb.😱
Woohoo luvit Shaun abfab as always 💕❤️💕
Jill, mucho and many thanks for your kind and always warmly welcomed comments.
You are a tower of strength to me and many others, a real poetry rock with your uplifting and generous comments and poems which I'll catch up on tonight.⭐️💙❤️😃
And just for you....
Cael Sul y Mamau bendigedig gyda'ch holl anwyliaid o'ch cwmpas a dymunaf yn dda i chi.
Which translates as...
Have a wonderful Mother's Day with all your loved ones around you and I wish you well.⭐️💙❤️😃
Awwwww Wow whatever that meant lol I love it all my friend 💕💙💕🤣
Jill I just put in .... Which translates as.....⭐️💙❤️😃
Just to clarify😃 and thanks again.
Now for lunch and that cuppa.......🤣 I'm dry as a bone!
Teehee you are mint my penfriend 😄🤣💕💙💕
Greg many thanks for the five stars and for pinning it as well.
Will read yours later tonight among also other good and generous members too.
In the meantime I wish you well and thank you.
Rob thank you also for your generous five stars and for pinning too.
I'll make inroads on your poems as soon as possible and other kind members too.
And I thank you for taking the time to read this poem as well.
Baker Street thank you for the five stars and for liking this humble poem sir.
It means a lot to me that another member has and I will make and find time soon, to read your poetry too.
I wish you well and I humbly thank your good self again.
wonderful poem
Thank you Greg for your kind comment and apologies for this late reply.
Be reading you soon tonight my friend.