Poem - 08 February 2015, 12:53

The Only One Falling

What is falling in love when you're the only one falling
Laying in bed full of anticipation but nobody's calling
You're ready to jump on in yet the other one's stalling
It's only my pillow that's wet from all the bawling

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Christopher Correia08 February 2015, 17:47

This one is ripe with implication, Travis...peeling away the surface it says much more...love is disappointing when it just goes one way; a bitter sweet reality in the well written verse...among many good lines this one stands out for me...good read

~~It's only my pillow that's wet from all the bawling

Travis Blair09 February 2015, 03:50

Thanks Christopher. This was a quick write I just put down because I was feeling a bit frustrated over a romantic interest that is crazy turning out one sided. Thanks for reading. Men do cry sometimes.