Poem -
You Broke Me
You Broke Me
You showed me to Love Myself
You wanted Freedom
So I left to better my Mental Health
You showed me to Love Myself
Had me disliking Who I Was
So I left to better my Mental Health
Had to learn what Love really Meant
Had me disliking Who I Was
I learned to Love myself First
Had to learn what Love really Meant
I also learned I wasn't to Blame
I learned to Love myself First
You wanted Freedom
I also learned I wasn't to Blame
You Broke Me
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Comments
Another pantoum. And though your first line concerns the reader, as they progress through your poem they realise that the writer has overcome that. Not only overcome but in so doing has leaned something about themselves. Your choice of lines shows that progression really well such that it is lines 1 and 3 of the last verse that stand out.
thank you exactly how i tried to express that. thank again
And exactly how you succeeded in expressing it. You are welcome.