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You Broke Me

You Broke Me

You Broke Me
You showed me to Love Myself
You wanted Freedom
So I left to better my Mental Health

You showed me to Love Myself
Had me disliking Who I Was
So I left to better my Mental Health
Had to learn what Love really MeantĀ 

Had me disliking Who I Was
I learned to Love myself FirstĀ 
Had to learn what Love really MeantĀ 
I also learned I wasn't to BlameĀ 

I learned to Love myself FirstĀ 
You wanted Freedom
I also learned I wasn't to BlameĀ 
You Broke Me

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Bernie Martin

Another pantoum. And though your first line concerns the reader, as they progress through your poem they realise that the writer has overcome that. Not only overcome but in so doing has leaned something about themselves. Your choice of lines shows that progression really well such that it is lines 1 and 3 of the last verse that stand out.Ā 

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