Poem -
Only You !
You were there when I had nothing to live for.
It was only you who found what no one else saw.
You knew it would take effort to bring me back,
But you displayed character others sorely lack !
You had a vision of theย better life I could lead.
You gaveย all the sustenance I could ever need !
Desiringย to make others noticeย who I should be,
You alone were able to realise potential in me !
From hell,ย many are not willing to think about,
I rose to discover myself and shrug off the doubt.
You were responsible for my unlikely resurrection.
No way will I be able to show enough appreciation.
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wonderful pen Richard. very romantic and quite loving
Glad you enjoyed this piece !
Best wishes to you.
:)
Hello Romeo...
Not everyone knows inner struggles that one may have...
They may not always know what to say or what to do...
The only thing they know is they can't lose you...
It's a blessing when what they say and do brings you to a much happier you...
The change is the appreciation...
Beautiful write!ย
Thank you for sharing...
Love and hugs!ย ย :)
sparrowsongย
Your comments so many times show you have experiences which have taught you about feelings of those less fortunate or those suffering due to a particular happening. You are in tune with what others go through, a great asset !
Thanks for being there and sharing your knowledge and experience.
Love and hugs ! ย :)
Thank you Richard for such beautiful words, I can totallyย identify with this wonderful poem, I too was "resurrected" byย the mostย beautiful flower in the garden. It takes a great man to be able to look so deeply into himself.
Your words are truly felt from the bottom of my heart.
I admire those who can speak from the heart so candidly, as you do !
So pleased you have found happiness and love after your ordeals.
Best wishes to you.
:)
SIR WATERS!!..... you continue to teach and inspire so continuously...... it is more than a pleasure to read your words brother poet !!....ALL STARS....... high fives my friend....... LOVE and ROCKETS !!.....Txoย ย ?
I like to share through poetry where I have been and what I have endured showing how a situation can be changed by the arrival of your soulmate and guardian angel ! This should give others in similar predicaments hope and optimism.
Glad you like what I'mย writing.
Warmest wishes. ย Hug.
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Hugs!
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Hi Richard Beautiful words of loveย
and thankfulness to your " Only you"
Always a pleasure to read your workย
Best wishes Debsย
Hug !