Poem -
~Oppression ~chapter two
Weary head lay down to rest,Β
Family close, truly blessed.Β
New Abode by lush green mead,Β
Dreary past, spectral heed.Β
Nestled fraught midst the sheets,Β
Thoughts erratic, sporadic heart beats.Β
Breathing deeply, sweat on brow,Β
Abruptly sprung, puzzled now!Β
3am, incessant squall, Infant cries, inside i fall,Β
No child of mine, whispers near,Β
In solace mode frozen in fear.Β
Twenty four hours soon to pass,Β
Sprawled in hark to moans & crass.Β
Constant clatter of plates & tray,Β
Emotional heap, I beg and pray.Β
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Comments
excellent!
Thank you.Β
I see minor tweaks here to the first one...excellent write ?
Thank youΒ
I love anything creepy, ghostly or 'other' Simon. Though iΒ tend to believe these days, that hell only exists in mankind...i believe the Cosmo to be a welcoming place, though, do any of us know anything??? Enjoyed ?
Thank you Marion i tend to agree
At first I thought I was reading chapter one but there are subtle differences ? x
Thank you Tina my approach was to almost imitate the first as the oppression grows from constant occurrence.Β
That makes total sense... Just read them again. Awesome work. Please, please, PLEASE don't give up WRITING x