Our funny world

When you're young, you're so naive to the world in which we reside
It goes from swings and slides and sweets, to rule after rule we abide
They say that free will is an illusion, and I believe this sane
When really all we do is work for the five percent to gain
Politicians writing stories daily, in the form of a manifesto
And on the world, their opinions are what they choose to bestow
You choose the opinion you like best, and then you vote to find
That our best interests really aren't what's taking up their mind
You tell me, in what sort of world, obesity is an issue
But the most they do, to help these souls, is hand them over a tissue
"I apologise sir, but to lose weight I think that you should know,
The gym is £40 a month, take a pen and sign below"
And if you smoke a cigarette, it's done on your own back
But either way we're going to charge you £20 per pack
Alcohol, also awful, stay away from that
But we're gonna tax it anyway, charging 20% VAT
I could go on and on, and bore you half to death
But I just ask why to these things, they should give themselves a rest
The world is more than bills and anger, if you look outside
The beautiful, is what keeps us sane, in this world that we reside
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I like this and can relate to it. I'm not good at writing reviews though, sorry - Syd
Haha no dramas, I appreciate the liking and relating! :)
Great message
well done
Welcome to Cosmofunnel
Lorna
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Thanks Lorna, much appreciated! XX
Hi Tyler, this is such a well written and a thought provoking piece. I really like the way you have captured the irony of the 'rules' according to the political set. I really enjoyed it.
Thanks so much. Yes that's what I was going for, another person bashing politicians! But it's more the system really.
Speaks to the socialist in me:
Sound poetry and philosophy, I like this very much. Great job and welcome aboard!
Shaun
We love the Philosophy! Thank you and and glad you enjoyed it :)