Our Sea.

Don't pretend that I'm your anchor
When it's you that stopped the tide.
Don't ache for me as the sun sets
Then banish me at dawn.
I've mourned you with bitter tears
And waited for you to try.
I've lost myself in finding you and
Dragging us back to land.
I gave my breath to fill your lungs
With love and hope and wonder.
My messages swept by seaΒ
To lands you'll never find.
Burning vessels of I and we and us
Only extinguished by your waves.
If we flow like water then
I lost you in the tide.
If we die today I know
I was the shadow on your shore.Β
If we survive another second I know
We're far and lost at sea.
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Using the varied imagery and moods of the sea as a metaphor for a troubled (and ultimately broken) relationship is a great idea which raises this poem well above the commonplace.
Insightful, inspired and intriguing.
Welcome to Cosmofunnel.
J ;)
Thank you so much :) you've made my night saying thatΒ