Poem -

 Outside My Body    

 Outside My Body    


shifted 

and

floated

outside

my 
body

today...

I
Straightened

my 
body

and 
went:

INSIDE.....

While

inside

after 
going

outside

I

repaired

my 

heart... 

Was 
it 
broken

or

under 

attack

who

knows
 

fixed 

it

While

outside
then
inside
my 
body
today...
 

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Bradford

Hey mark I have heard of this before but I have not tried or experienced anything like it. A thought provoking write. Cheers rock 

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author
mark thomas

HRL-Thank you....very easy thing do ..close your eyes let i rip..and do not get scared.and then pop back in

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Devon La Porte

Mark what's up man? Astral projection, one of my favorites to explore writing on. I have actually experienced this one night, very freaky and at the time I had no idea what it was or what I had achieved. I like the approach you took to writing it, keeping it succinct but still respecting ghe mystery of it. Very cool man.

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mark thomas

Devon-what's up man? thanks glad you liked....does not need to be freaky... will happen one day anyway...its a good way to know you should not fear death...and know there is no F#%#*ing reaper...

 I have found no heaven or hell...in my travel...

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Devon La Porte

Have uou ever seen Insidious, if that is possible proceed with caution. It was freaky to me unknowing at the age of 19 when it happened, but not too much now. Now I would love to embrace that experience but I can never tell when it is happening and usually there is tell tale signs.

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Devon La Porte

The first two are incredible the third is before those two but you have to watch the second to understand the first one it explains everything. Im pretty sure you will enjoy.

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Dameon Farris

Wow beautiful transaction I believe there's been multiple of times were I found myself outside of my body anyhow this is a great piece and excellently writen and worded and great rhyming as well n thank you for sharing XD

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