This was a great haiku...of course saying that is pretty ironic given the subject matter but anyways, there was more to this little haiku than one would think..I think the "until you wale up tomorrow" is the best part because it implies something and is like a cliffhanger...lol anyways I liked it great job Val
Much love, Curious
With you!!ย In every way!!..........and..........sometimes...........waking up the next day can be a serious disappointment!!.............miss you so much!!.............T xo
Oh, I can relate. ย Been there done thatโฆit worked so well for a whileโฆI started drowning with my sorrows and waking up gasping for breath. ย My mind is clear nowโฆyepโฆonly waterโฆroom temperature for me!
Hi Valerie!ย Love Cherie's comment,ย "I understand the need to numb it by drinking"! I myself very rarely indulge but can certainly empathize with those that succumb when sorrows get too much! A great Haiku, dear friend... love Jack xxx
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Hi Poetess Valerie Lynn,
An excellent Haiku poem, decorated with deep pain in it, love, my applause,
Love & regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you dear bro!!
Val โฅ๏ธ
This was a great haiku...of course saying that is pretty ironic given the subject matter but anyways, there was more to this little haiku than one would think..I think the "until you wale up tomorrow" is the best part because it implies something and is like a cliffhanger...lol anyways I liked it great job Val
Much love, Curious
Aww thank you CO!! You leave me the greatest comments ever!! Much Love to You for taking the time to comment!! I will be back on here writing again!!
With Love,
Val โฅ๏ธ
With you!!ย In every way!!..........and..........sometimes...........waking up the next day can be a serious disappointment!!.............miss you so much!!.............T xo
I know what you mean...you are such an amazing friend. I'm so thankful to have you in my life!!
Love,
Val โฅ๏ธ
Just great !!! Best wishes !ย
A lot can be said in a few words and you spoke in chapters in just three verses.
All too common this syndrome;ย
A lot of suffering herein. Good write Val.ย
Best wishes from Jai :)
Valโฆ
Oh, I can relate. ย Been there done thatโฆit worked so well for a whileโฆI started drowning with my sorrows and waking up gasping for breath. ย My mind is clear nowโฆyepโฆonly waterโฆroom temperature for me!
xox ย val
Hi Valerie!ย Love Cherie's comment,ย "I understand the need to numb it by drinking"! I myself very rarely indulge but can certainly empathize with those that succumb when sorrows get too much! A great Haiku, dear friend... love Jack xxx
With four words, haiku describes all the horror which usually behind a bottle of alcohol. A greeting.
~~comment Kitty has stopped by to give you high 5
Happends alot trying to drown out all negative in life with alcoholic beverages or something