PAINTING HER IMPRESSION
There are times her image is so piercing, so pristine, in the window of my mind
That I feel the artist in me yearning, to create her impression
Through everlasting oils in perfect strokes that imbue her countenance
With lovely disposition, and inner, tranquil, lightness of expression
That the easel seems to bow, to support this manifestation
Created by her God-given curves and lines that need no enhancing
She's a Botticelli to me now, a perfect period of affectionate
Renderings and etchings, from the greatest painters of all time
It's her soul, that reminds me of how brightly her beauty shines
In this, a pool of indecision where I become sure that she's the vision
It's so very clear to me now, how to make this artistic transition
From painting my impressions, to sculpting the words that give her life
With longevity in her name, and in the way she takes her time
By slowing her inner grace, until it glows upon her face
Shuts down my arrogance, and rearranges all my plans
So to admire, the sweet seductiveness in her glance
And if I'm given half-a-chance, I'll create the perfect ambiance
To display her quintessential expression
An angelic, mirrored, smile
Revealing love's reflection
My hand trembling all the while
As,
I'm Painting Her Impression...
Tony Taylor
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lovely linda
THanx LINDA!!...... always a pleasure hearing from you my friend !!.......smiles......T xo ?☀✴✳
You don't need to be a painter to paint her beautifully and you'd just done that with your words...This is beautiful Tony....LOVE and ROCKETS!!
VERY cool comment your ROSE-NESS!!...... you're exactly right..... and indeed it was the point of the poem...... one doesn't need a brush to paint..... words work just as well!!..... smiles......Thanx so much for this sister girl!!......hugs-n-smiles!!.......T xo ?☀✴✳
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
I paint the canvas of perfection, for upon it there is you;
The oils mix with the blood of my heart, for it loves you very true!
My brush and easel delineate, to your beauties gift from God;
Enhancement is not needed, painted with your Creator's nod!
I finish and you come to life, my sculpture lives and breathes;
My inner turmoil disappears, your love to me bequeathed!
My portrait becomes the artist, for she portrays our bonded souls;
And she creates the perfect ambiance, this torn man now is whole!
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Dear brother poet LARRY!!...... what can I say my friend!!...... your pen is mighty..... your quick mind and wit......a pleasure to behold!!....... you're friggin' brilliant!!......hugs-n-high fives.......T xo ?☀✴✳
My Dear Brother Tony,
Of course this one was so easy for me, having been an art dealer for almost fifty years. You primed and outlined the canvas, and all I did was to fill in the numbers. My pen is only as mighty as its' brilliant inspiration, in your case, which is always a "given".
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Sir LARRY!!.... you paint by numbers better than anyone I know!!.......SMILES!!......thanx VERY much dear friend!!....... stay groovy!!......T xo ?☀✴✳♥
What is truly beautiful about this write, it's evident the love you have and share for C. I find myself studying the shape of my wife's face going over the details in my mind like iam painting a picture I will always remember as if it is the first or last time I will see it again. A very inspiring idea Tony that you conveyed so beautifully......that is why you are the man. I pinn this for so many reasons, all point at it as an incredible write. Peace!
You know what D!!.....what would be cool..... and make me feel like I did something special..... would be if your wife could read this comment you left me here..... so she could see how much she is in your thoughts...... not that she doesn't know you Love her..... but very few get to see it from such a removed and unselfish perspective..... it is beautiful what you just said about her..... and if and when we do meet..... I'm gonna "bust you out" by pointing her here!!...... big, huge, smiles!!...... so cool of you to leave me all these comments today bro..... been missin' you around here...... peace......T xo ?☀✴✳♥
Stunning!
Thanx MIKAYLA!!.....I appreciate you taking the time with this..... awesome feedback!!...... smiles.......T xo ?☀✴✳
This is lovely xx
Thanx LUCY.... sorry for the late reply.... you rock girlfriend!!..... smiles....T xo ♥