Poem -
PARADISA IS LOST
The tears are in my eyes for paradise is lost.
The fire burned the entire city it is gone,
The tears are in my eyes for all the people,
Who died lets all say prayer for there souls,
Paradisa is lost the fireΒ that Β I will crier more,
So please bow you head in prayer and let,
those who lived live inΒ peace in there mind,
please find prayer for those who died and,
For those who live and hope thayΒ Β will survive,
Paradisa is lost so say prayer send some flowers,
Paradisa is lost.
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Dear Greg,
What a lovely tribute to these poor people, some of whom, lost their lives, while the rest lost everything.Β Β
John Milton wrote a famous book
He called it "Paradise Lost"
Now, almost four centuries later
It has come true, with such a dire cost
Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you linda and larry it is very sad what happened some died in there cars and there more fires and some day there will be nothing left some time do think this GODs will and he as started the end of the world I hope not not in my life time I hope
Hello Greg...
The warnings were given a couple of days ago...
But, no one knows exactly where one may happen...
Due to the extreme dry weather and winds the State was at risk...
ββββββParadise is the town that not only the Pub Shootings occurred on Wednesday but, the fires struck too...
They had been the safest City in the Nation...
As far as God's will and the End of the World, why not in our lifetime?
We certainly aren't special, we're not great, we haven't done what we should...
Heck, People don't even like Him never mind pay attention...
ββββββI don't even know how you can say not in your lifetime you hope...
Remember, if we're not part of the solution we're part of the problem...
Great tribute and dedication...
I'm sure that they will see just how wonderful our Government and Charities are...Β
Heck, it might even surprise me because, it could be they're very special...
Others have lost homes and no one really helped or cared...
Maybe, they've changed...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
thank you sparrowsong for you insight I injoyed
P.S. Most people are dark, depressed and suicidal right?
Perfect conditions for Him to do something...
Wouldn't you honestly say?
Hugs again...
sparrowsong
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sublime write. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
Greg sometimes life can be cruel and so unforgiving as your poem tells it.
A little prayer can go a long way though and give the sender a sense of being and worth for those lost. To remember them.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this matter and I agree with you and with whatΒ you have achieved by doing so.
Thank you ShaunΒ