" PARALLAX of LOVE "

You move through my field of vision
Even though I've never met you
You move into a juxtaposition
As I grow ever closer to you
Why is it that, my heart beats faster
Whenever I feel your presence, hear your voice
Tell me exactly what you're after
Allow my heart to adapt, and make a choice
As your beauty radiates across my pulse and mind
It's apparent that you're bewitching me
An unexpected point of view, I find
And I know that you have invaded me
I realize the measure of this apparent parallax
Is caused by your constant movement through my soul
And although I desire to hold you, something holds me back
Perhaps it's that I do not wish to relinquish control
Or, perhaps it's that, I'm experiencing a Parallax of Love
Tony Taylor (Chicago)

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so resonates..! ever since cyber space has taken over, I think we have all had feelings for one or another that we have never met...sometimes it's even more exciting because your mind visualizes what you are yearning for in your dreams...love this!! like so many others..awesome..
B
Hey B...very cool that you used cyber-space ........comparatively.........and I SO agree that your mind visualizes (or fills in that which is not apparent) as you come to know people in this forum........and depending on how positive or negative your personality is.......well, I think you can see where I'm going here.........very cool to have you comment on this B..........stay close sister girl....your light is just beginning to shine here...........smiles.........T xx
Hey Tony! I enjoyed this poem especially because I can relate. I have felt similar about someone I once knew. Sadly it didnt work out. But the memory of the feelings he stirred within me remain.
Hi Felicia, thanks so much for taking the time to read this...........I'm so glad you could relate to this.........much appreciated my friend.........tony xx
I loved it T` Paralax `what seems to be a change in the position of something when you look at it from a different place` I am so chuffed that my tatty little dictionary had it in! A great piece and well done for using such an unusual word in a poem. Love G xx
Your'e funny G, what the heck is "tatty"?........tattered? .......anyway, I'm so impressed that you would take the time to go look it up.........very cool sister girl..........love you G..........smiles.......T xx
You bet I looked it up! I`d never heard of the blummin thing before!! yes tatty means tattered, scruffy, well used and so on!! Love G xx