Poem -
past consumes my present mind
Its more then a memory
is more like a dream,
A nightmare turning my past times into a documentary,
The clock turns back time and suddenly my heart dropped,
I thought it was over I thought it had stopped,
Hell never left me It hangs on my back,
I thought it was over and then just SMACK!
I escaped from the reality to just end up stuck in my head,
It eats me up I sometimes wish to just drop dead.
I am strong and I know,
But if it were you should you stay till tomorrow?
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Hey MIKHAELA::....I like the intent here..... I'm wondering if English is your first language?.....regãrdless......this ......as Dblankportrait conveyed so well.....is filled with great expression ......and conveys beautifully the struggle gong in the mind here!!...... well done.... and ......WELCOME to COSMO!!......T xo. ?✳✴☀
I am super new to this, English is my first Language, and thank you!
I love it! The past can haunt you, but even then, living in the present and seeing what tomorrow brings. Can show how brave and strong you are.
Thank you so much!
amazing!
Thank you so much! I am so new to allowing myself to let go and express myself. your comment means a lot!
hey, same here! i only just started showing my poems being open. You're extremely talented, don't let others tell you otherwise. if your dream is to be a poet, than pursue it, cause you can do it!
Its frightening thats for sure, but people like yourself who lift others up makes me want to continue. Thanks again!
No problem you! :) keep up the good work!
hi, i really like this poem, you did a great job.
Thank you so much!!
A large part of the reason we write (especially poetry) is to exorcise those ghosts from our past. Anyone, and everyone, can do that. But to take a horrible experience and make from it a work of art...that requires talent and a will to use that talent. Talent and will: two things you obviously have in abundance!
Keep using them! And keep sharing them with us.
Beautiful work.
J ;)
Thank you so much!