Poem -
PATH
peak
highest
the
to
you
take
can
things
little
tiny
the
but
enough
to
get
you
off
the
cliff
Get up, follow the path
dodge the thorns, the stings
fill up the minds with hopes
and dreams,
content in every little thing is
also content in much
feel like you have an eagle wings.
Life has no manual order
take life without being suppressed
by any sense of order -
is an inscrutable order,
that bohemia of body and soul
that throws the door wide open
to the new border-
a total serendipity!!!
Copyright © by LCYODICO
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I love the way you started this piece...Like droplets...then the real thing...Very inpiring...I love every word of this but the last verse drives home for me:
Life has no manual order
take life without being suppressed
by any sense of order -
is an inscrutable order,
that bohemia of body and soul
that opens its door wide open
to the new border-
a total serendipity!!!
Had to read it over and over again...Thanks for sharing
Hi Rose. I appreciate you mention the last verse: when a person appreciates little things in life, doesn't have to do things like others do, lives in unconventional lifestyle, that's the Bohemian way of life ## actually the word emerged in France in the 19th century when artists began to concentrate consciously or unconsciously, secedes from the conventionality in life ---they reached that far!!!beyond borders!!
Thanks for dropping by
Hugs and kisses
Leah
Leah, very inspiring work, reads like a celebration! the beginning fascinates me, how you use the one word lines, like an appetizer....a very creative and unique poem, so captivating....love this poem, cheers poet
Oh! I am delighted with your inspiring words!! I reckon, I will try something different! Thank you so much
Oh Leah I love this, the beginning is almost like a set of wings flowing in opposite directions, its very clever and really has such a positive feel
Lorna xxx
Hi Lorna, thank you! It came out of the blue!! luv and hugs
Leah