Poem -
Patience ain't Poison
Waiting Seems like a wall
But nothing hangs just fall
Feels like a dream
But nothing 's pleasant down this stream
Like starting last when the whistle blows
Or losing footing at the end of the race
Seems like a hill
Watching others progress and your so still
Still enough to hunger for the dream
Low enough to know it's very worth
Humble enough to see ones true friends
Patience ain't poison
It's slow but it births the finest decisions
Freeze actions forms the latest stories
Heartbreak makes room for better meanings
Patience ain't poison
The first bite is bitter but in the end so sweet
There may be pain
But it improves and gives purpose
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a power pack write, Cleo, coming from a place of wisdom and experience, superb read, my friend, have great day...cheers poet
Watching others progress and your so still
Still enough to hunger for the dream
Hi Chris, thanks for dropping by. Appreciate your kind words. Lots of love and hugs. Cheers.
Hey CLEO!!..... this is powerful stuff girlfriend...... one of my favorite pieces of yours .......it almost has a musical ring to it the way the of "Patience ain't poison".. repeats so perfectly throughout....... all around kick ass phrasing....... making a VERY powerful point..." The first bite is bitter but in the end so sweet!"....... fistful-O-Stars......PINNED this one.......LOVE it!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo ?✳✴☀
Hi Tony, thanks a lot. Lots of love and hugs. Warm regards. Cheers.
Hi Cleo This remind of the words "Great things come to he who waits"
and also "patience is a virtue"
powerful points you give loved the theme of your write
lovely to see you around the pages
Great write!
Love n hugs Debs
Hi Debs, true indeed. Thanks for stopping by. Lots of love and hugs. Cheers.
"Patience ain't poison
The first bite is bitter but in the end so sweet
There may be pain
But it improves and gives purpose"
I heard somewhere that "patience is a virtue"....and "good things come to those who wait patiently".....Very insightful write....Thanks for sharing...
Hi Rose, thanks a lot. Warm regards. Cheers.