Poem -

Peaches

a 575 haiku

Peaches

Peaches ripen then
They rot and fall food for worms
Elsewhere children starve 
 

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Tony Taylor

Delivering a HAIKU has been one of the few forms I have found to be difficult for me personally......NOT a problem for you however......this is quite beautiful and sad and frustrating.....but that's the point!!......perfectly crafted my friend!!.....packing a wallop with a 5-7-5 rhyme scheme!!...wow!!.....PINNED!!....work it! Own it!! Work it!! Own it!! (smiles).......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo  : )

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Neville

More than merely muchly appreciated my friend .. Much more than merely .. More like magnificently ... maybe mate :) 

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Marion

Humanity in a nutshell Neville...you know it well x

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Neville

Thank you no end .. my friend :) N x

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Shaun Cronick

It is as it is.
For will we ever truly learn to stop thinking of ourselves as this so called
"civilised society" and become more proactive to those less unfortunate around us.
Time will tell and the sooner the better for all.
Thanks Neville and one to clarion.

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Neville

In the present predominantly sad world, you just made me smile big :)

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