Delivering a HAIKU has been one of the few forms I have found to be difficult for me personally......NOT a problem for you however......this is quite beautiful and sad and frustrating.....but that's the point!!......perfectly crafted my friend!!.....packing a wallop with a 5-7-5 rhyme scheme!!...wow!!.....PINNED!!....work it! Own it!! Work it!! Own it!! (smiles).......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
It is as it is.
For will we ever truly learn to stop thinking of ourselves as this so called
"civilised society" and become more proactive to those less unfortunate around us.
Time will tell and the sooner the better for all.
Thanks Neville and one to clarion.
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well written Linda
Thank you Linda
Delivering a HAIKU has been one of the few forms I have found to be difficult for me personally......NOT a problem for you however......this is quite beautiful and sad and frustrating.....but that's the point!!......perfectly crafted my friend!!.....packing a wallop with a 5-7-5 rhyme scheme!!...wow!!.....PINNED!!....work it! Own it!! Work it!! Own it!! (smiles).......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
More than merely muchly appreciated my friend .. Much more than merely .. More like magnificently ... maybe mate :)
Humanity in a nutshell Neville...you know it well x
Thank you no end .. my friend :) N x
It is as it is.
For will we ever truly learn to stop thinking of ourselves as this so called
"civilised society" and become more proactive to those less unfortunate around us.
Time will tell and the sooner the better for all.
Thanks Neville and one to clarion.
In the present predominantly sad world, you just made me smile big :)