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petal tracks

petal tracks

petal tracks

To chocolate white

To hearts

Of roses red....

Still

To life.....for...now

Here i am with gentle thoughts

Of Thee

Like sunshine lights my darkened heart

Let me be guided by the petals track

To your scent of beauty that lay before me

With this....

I must remember LoVe

For Roses bring a special touch to soft

Forever loving you

On each and every Day

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Lily Cas

Really really REALLY like this one. It's got a unique rhythm that's quite pleasing to the ear if read aloud. It also presents a beautiful image in my mind. All stars! :) 

xxxLily 

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Richard Waters

Gorgeous write at this special time of year !

Best wishes.  :)

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Lorris Nearly missed this one .
Beautiful words of love for your love 
 your Valentine 
Great write very much enjoyed 
Best wishes Debs 

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Rose Sho

Yeah ...."For Roses bring a special touch to soft...." I love Roses....Thank God I'm one..lol..beautiful write Lorris...enjoyed

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