In the end if your mind believes it then you go in which ever direction it believes whether it's good or bad so basically to have a positive mindset should eliminate any suffering as the mind is more balanced. Meditation also helps us re focus.Β
Hello PRATIBHA!!β¦.a VERY succinctly crafted phrasing of a truly sublimeΒ truth!!β¦β¦.There's a little book called "As a man Thinketh" that goes into great depth over this notion......and wise men from every culture have spent lots of time meditating/contemplating on the same!!β¦...ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!β¦...well done dear poet sister!!β¦...great debut piece......and β¦..in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!β¦β¦.LOVE & ROCKETS!!β¦β¦..T xoΒ : )
Hi Tony thank you so much for the lovely comment and the book recommendation! I'm very humble you pinned my piece. I am feeling very welcomed on here thank you and I just love reading other people's writing who share the same passion as me!! :)
Wise well chosen words and beautifully expressed, for a mind can be a road(s) twisting and turning but are they ever truly randomly or is one's inner journey already set to travel on.
Perhaps life is the steering wheel guiding us hopefully to your closing line for the betterment of the individual, to reach that place of true inner peace, one's utopia.Β Β
Pratibha it maybe short and sweet but your poem and your message of hope, will ever fade.
Thanks for making me stop and think and full honours respectfully given. x.
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Thought provoking and mind bending to the peace we all crave!
Great poem. Well done!Β
Thanks safy. It was more a phrase. Short and sweet!!
exceptional write.
Thank you x
wonderful poem
Thank you x
This is really good ?
true to reality xx
Thank you. Defo is x
Interesting thoughts.Β
Β "Our mind is thr biggest cause of our suffering" it has been said.
In the end if your mind believes it then you go in which ever direction it believes whether it's good or bad so basically to have a positive mindset should eliminate any suffering as the mind is more balanced. Meditation also helps us re focus.Β
Hello PRATIBHA!!β¦.a VERY succinctly crafted phrasing of a truly sublimeΒ truth!!β¦β¦.There's a little book called "As a man Thinketh" that goes into great depth over this notion......and wise men from every culture have spent lots of time meditating/contemplating on the same!!β¦...ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!β¦...well done dear poet sister!!β¦...great debut piece......and β¦..in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!β¦β¦.LOVE & ROCKETS!!β¦β¦..T xoΒ : )
Hi Tony thank you so much for the lovely comment and the book recommendation! I'm very humble you pinned my piece. I am feeling very welcomed on here thank you and I just love reading other people's writing who share the same passion as me!! :)
Wise well chosen words and beautifully expressed, for a mind can be a road(s) twisting and turning but are they ever truly randomly or is one's inner journey already set to travel on.
Perhaps life is the steering wheel guiding us hopefully to your closing line for the betterment of the individual, to reach that place of true inner peace, one's utopia.Β Β
Pratibha it maybe short and sweet but your poem and your message of hope, will ever fade.
Thanks for making me stop and think and full honours respectfully given. x.