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Pie-in-the-sky for me

Pie-in-the-sky for me

Pretty painted pallettes magenta, blue & gold.. sworn cherished secrets never to be told..figures grey & ghostly hanging from a silver thread.. all of these opaque visions  entangled inside my head..

The man sitting amidst his moonbeams drawing open his curtained shrouds.. shining on oblivion deep down beyond the clouds..as he dances with the Planets tripping the light Fandango... betwixt millions of twinkling stars, his disco balls of technicolour glow..

Magical mysteries, poisonous potions..adventurous actions amongst automobile motions..an army of marching soldiers on a revelery of reverie..my woolgathering between my castle-bulilding..a whimsical pie-in-the-sky for me..Beyond the Land of milk and honey where my imagination flows.. with my fictional fairy tales of absolutely anything goes...

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Barry Childs

Beautiful use of words and so so lyrical.
Barry x

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Jill Tait

Aww so pleased you enjoyed my ditty Thank you Barry x💙

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Jill Tait

Awww Thank you Lauren luv so kind comments 💕💕💕

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A Lonely Journey

Jill Wordsworth! 
That was amazing! I just loved that! So gorgeously penned. Had to pin it for future reference(or in case I need to plaguerize something! Kidding). 
That was really a great write, though. I'm very impressed. Now can you write something about flatulent goats? Thank you. 
Wonderful. 
Matthew. 
 

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Jill Tait

Teehee aww thank you Matthew haha goats farting!!! 🤣🤣🤣

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A Lonely Journey

LOL! 
Don't you think it would make a good poem, though? I mean, goats are people, too, and sometimes experience intestinal discomfort as we all do, especially after eating a can, or something, so it would be nice to recognize their internal strife, wouldn't it? You can do it! 

M. 

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Jill Tait

Errrrr lol mmmmm let me see hahaha byt flatulenting lol sure ive mispelled thatun lol xx

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A Lonely Journey

Yes, you have, and they're two completely different things. Flatulenting is a past tense of flatulating, meaning 'to offer up a flatulent aroma to some hens', so you're way off base there. Please use a dictionary. LOL. 
Get writing! 

M. 

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Jill Tait

Did goat one especially for u yesterday but im very sad now coz my good friends been a horrific car crash :((

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Jill Tait

Teehee just as well u keep me right!!! 🤣❤️

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