I know that my attention does not always go the way she wants, so I make it up in other ways! That does not mean she does not let me know. Because she does, I got the bite marks to prove it!
Your poem makes me see anger and disappointment. Your love will still be there, but it is wounded! Good job, Anthony
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I know that my attention does not always go the way she wants, so I make it up in other ways! That does not mean she does not let me know. Because she does, I got the bite marks to prove it!
Your poem makes me see anger and disappointment. Your love will still be there, but it is wounded! Good job, Anthony
you've got the point of this haiku Anthony and yes wounded is a good word cheers x
well said piece susan !! keep rising! tina x
thanks tina x