Poem -
Playing
We ran like children in the rain
Skipping and jumping
and playing again
It was late at night
When nobody could hear
But we woke up our neighbours
And still we didn't care
Our hearts were merry
and our feet were bare.
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YES!!!! Chris!!!...........you captured the hell outta that memory...........so perfectly open to the breathing room in poetry............I think EVERYONE who reads this is gonna find a great relationship with your words..... ...truly, succinctly beautiful.............Love this brother!!............smokin' grooves!!..........ttyl.........T xo
This was simple and perfect just as I imagined you wanted it, this was nostalgic for me as well as many others I'm sure
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Barry, I'm glad you like it brother, I felt I had to post a few after not posting for so long....cheers me pal, thanks for encouragement
T, it feels like years since we've talked, my internet was down for a few days and my computer is crap; no other way to say it, lol.....glad you like this one, I still remember what inspired it and wish there were more ....I believe that play should never leave us, even when we get much older, so sad when it leaves...thanks for comment big bro.
Curious, thanks a million for your comment, this one was a very fast write; as most writes should be, ( I edit my poems to death) yes it was nostalgic in reality, but it shouldn't be, even adults should never stop playing, but we do and yes the times we played become nostalgic....cheers Curious
Wow I missed thanking you for your comment Cherie, kindred spirits on this believe me, lol....yes I love play more than most things, I don't do enough.....thanks a million, and it's good to have you back where you belong; okay I have to stop myself from writing down the lyrics from the song 'Hello Dolly' you're looking swell, Cherie....I can tell Cherie....later sis lol
Awww beautiful angel,
What deep thoughts, provoking the sense of freedom and glee...only children seem to have....
Marvelous ! Great conception and delivers in its construction!
This invokes thoughts of innocence and fun........You help make me dream...
Have a great life and writing journey angel..
Love and hugs
Keep smiling ;P
Giggles the Poet
P.S. thank you for your beautiful review.... I deeply appreciate it :)
Wow, thank you for such a sweet comment, Brenda (Giggles the Poet) I appreciate it very much, love and hugs right back
P. S. I suddenly feel that my name sounds plain, I may need a nickname, lol...cheers sweet lady