Poem -
Poet Lane
I felt a hammering of home
to heart,
deep within
the birdcage bones-
In a distant town~called Levittown
country cruise, dreamer's brain
noticing a single street
this widely explored place....can it be my place.....
on Poet Lane.
For now it's a wonder
every writer's story
in travels, starts
or ends right here.
Quiet knows better parts of night
blinking stars viewed by blink less eyes,
days hum from highways traffic in competition
busy bees return to hives,
softball cheers echo in the fade
of fields resting beyond the wooded pine.
Residents have long since drained
the voice of ink,
upon blank sheets until blind defeat
where a lonely populated place....is my place....
on an endless street...
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grand write Devon
Thank you so very much Lisa. Although this is a real street I encountered while driving through Levittown, all of us poets take up residence on Poet Lane. Peace!
Hi Devon Great write this topic is right up my street
loved this one Best wishes Debs
Hey....thanks Debs. It is an inspirational street. Love and peace to you sweetheart.
Hey Devon a great write . We should all meet up at corner for a beer to discuss the latest poems and how the world has shaped us all somehow. Very cool read . Hope all is well your friend rock
Yo Rock, im down with that man lol. Thanks....truly glad you liked it. All is well my friend. Peace brother.
I should consider moving there.
Kimmy my man, I believe you've spent enough time to call yourself a resident. Thanks for commenting and peace to you.
Truly worthy nomination for the October contest.
Keep 'em coming my friend !
Your pieces ooze deliberation and reflection.
Take care. :)
Thanks Richard.
Iam just grateful for all the wonderful comments and feedback.
Much love and peace to you.
Love and peace in return.
:)
Wow!!.... Cherie was right ....I Have been missing some great stuff D!!......this was super-creative....... there are some VERY artistic lines in this .....memorable enough to be PINNED for future reference!!... " Deep within the birdcage bones..."........ love the way that mind of your s works...... Congrats on the nomination man!!.......VERY cool!! LOVE and ROCKETS !!......T xo
Thanks T. My end will be on Poet Lane. Really glad you liked this. Peace brother!
nicely written poem linda
Well thank you Linda. Glad you read and enjoyed.