Poetry Vs Racism
poetry: I am never jealous or judgemental.
Racism: I am so powerful in the society and too difficult to handle.
poetry: I seek permission as I embody humbleness.
Racism:I am magnanimously spread, in my presence breeds selfishness.
poetry: My owner is expressive and unbiased.
Racism:i own majority of the kingdom and am never poised.
poetry: My humility can lead to universal brotherhood.
Racism: ( with lots of pride) this cannot be achieved in my appearance so shrewd.
poetry: i will continue to emerge in the most objective ways.
Racism: Noone can oppress me , we shall see who stays.
poetry: TRUTH and GOODNESS will prevail as I can be its pioneer and source.
Racism: As long as I dominate, those two noone can force.
(Places swapped for round 2)
Racism: you are just an expression, you cant change an iota of anything.
poetry: i conceive through a poets soul and can pacify the most venomous sting.
Racism: I love to oppress and humiliate
poetry: i am soulful and graceful , my owners pen i humbly dictate.
Racism:I dominate the current era , from me there is no escape.
poetry: Dont underestimate my presence, a bright future I will drape.
Racism:I cant be bothered, will see what follows.
poetry: The more I spread, the more you shall become hollow.
( racism seems flustered and acts less powerful)
racism:Do you have anything more to say??
POETRY:We have nothing in common and together we can never stay.
PS: lower and upper case initials for racism and poetry have been purposely done.
peace and love ?
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Comments
This is a wonderful piece. The pen is definitely mightier than the sword & one day, here’s hoping, swords will be no more ??
Hi Tracey, how is it going?
Lets hope for the day when there are no more swords. Amen ?
thank you for your wonderful feedback. Mean a lot ??
Charu
This is a wonderful piece, as it makes the reader think. As poets I think we should go beyond what is comfortable and write outside the box. This is the only way we can change the wheels of society. Love, diversity and tolerance is what it is all about. Enjoyed this read very much
Thanks
Greg
Hey Greg , thank you my dear brother. Yes that is so correct what you said, diversity,tolerance and acceptance is what its all about.
Your Feedback is highly appreciated. Ty
peace love and regards ?✌️
Hey CHARU!!.....this a VERY well conceived piece of poetic/philosophical endeavor...... showing powerfully and with great clarity the strength in words when used with great forethought and intent!!.....I especially found the 'two sides of the coin' approach most clever dear poet brother!!....,,.ALL STARS!!...... well done my friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo ???✴?✴❤
Hey Tony, thank you ? my dear for your great feedback.
Through your comments and thoughts, I feel we all on cosmo are a part of the bigger picture and can truly be pioneers for unconditional love and peace.
i am a girl though ?( my name is unisex) so its very normal for others to think ? if they havent seen me. Its quite cool.
peace and love , best regards ???
Charu,
This is powerful! I admire your talent for I could never write as you do. What a deep talented poet you are. I'll be blessed reading your work. Thank you!
Terry Kay
Hi there Terry, Thank you for taking your precious time to read my work and for your kind words. I feel very honoured and humbled.
Likewise with regards to your work,
you are exceptionally talented and unique . And I will continue to follow you and learn from your work.
We are all building a strong family here on Cosmo
Much love and peace ??
Cleverly written, love the dialogue approach with the power struggle dynamics. Truly gifted writing.
J
Thank you J , i really appreciate your comments from the bottom of my heart.
best regards ?
i enjoyed the tug of war between these two. while poetry is expressive it knows it's limits and is unafraid, it carries a mean punch too. i enjoyed this read.
Thank you Sarah ?