Poem - 29 January 2015, 12:17 Potential Can't Pay Bills Nikki Roberts Mr. POTENTIAL, I do like your palm and teeth, but I'd much rather see THE MONEY. Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 653 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Money Survival Work Poetry Genre: Freestyle 5 comments
Beth Landheart29 January 2015, 12:35 SOOOO Relatable! And I love the use of "palm and teeth" here. And then you punch it in the 3rd line. Would this be considered to be satirical humor? Reply
Tony Taylor29 January 2015, 13:21 "Jerry Maguire"..........very cool write.......succinct..............I agree with Barry........well done my friend............smiles......T xx Reply
Nikki Roberts29 January 2015, 14:07 There is a kindness that trails your words, Tony, lingering here in good spirit...bringing us closer in community and making me feel damn proud. :) Thank you, love! You chased away my doubts! :) Reply
Britany Stephens29 January 2015, 14:23 Cool right indeed. Mr Mr Mr Potential show me the money please :-)) Reply
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SOOOO Relatable! And I love the use of "palm and teeth" here. And then you punch it in the 3rd line. Would this be considered to be satirical humor?
"Jerry Maguire"..........very cool write.......succinct..............I agree with Barry........well done my friend............smiles......T xx
Blessings, Barry! :) The money, indeed! LOL *Hugs*
There is a kindness that trails your words, Tony, lingering here in good spirit...bringing us closer in community and making me feel damn proud. :) Thank you, love! You chased away my doubts! :)
Cool right indeed. Mr Mr Mr Potential show me the money please :-))