Poem -
Power
I could give you
A piece of me
And still have more
To spare
Steal my heart
Steal my art
I'm easy to repair
Take it all
Leave me none
It's fine I come prepared
I'll build the world
And break it down
And hardly even care
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Anonymo awesome write, your resiliency to give or be taken from and still stay strong I have to give it to you that's power. Enjoyed the flow and rhyme of this allstars.
Wow thanks Devon, I was very unsure of the flow because Im just getting the hang of flowing naturally bur IL glad you liked it, it's a pleasure to be of your acquaintance :)
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Hey A~.......this DEFINITELY has the flow you were referring to grappling with............so much so, I just pulled out my guitar man...........this would make a kick ass song my friend.............it holds onto it's integrity (power) because of the awesome continuity.........and killer phrasing........each line being memorable to your listeners (or readers) ear.........and tearing at the heart strings...........don't think you'll be anonymous for too long bro!!.............ALL STARSÂ Â Â Â PINNED..........T xo
ps. NOTHING makes me pull out my guitar (just sayin'!)
Hey A a beautifully crafted work . I love your rhymes on this write. Â Very well thought out . You have my votes all stars . Hrl wishing you and your family a wonderful Merry Christmas.Â