Poem -
LAST MOMENTS
Just the lightest touch
Fingertip to fingertip
The smallest of moments
The frailest of connections
The weakest of threads
Between this world and the next
Between you and I
And youĀ
AreĀ
A
Heartbeat
Away
From...
Your eyelids flicker
The slightest of tremors
For you are
Almost....
Not here....
At....
All......
And in that moment
Before you slip through the veil
Where nothing is spoken
And everything is said
It is mended
And all that it was
Is honoured and kept
And all it was not is
Forgiven
Forgot
Leaving only the love
And I'm glad that I made it
In time...
Marion Price( 2019)
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" THE LAST WALTZ " ? It, is hard to take.....andĀ " touch " !!! That, ambience, or atmosphere, which procludes every soul from realizing " truth " ! :) You, recognize value in the " here and now " AND THE MOMENT.
In your heart, is all you need. Is that, not so ? When " push, comes to, SHOVE " AND LOVE, you understand the " be all, and end all " of it.
Life, may have treated you in a certain way BUT, you get what you want, despite " deaths door " always, being present. Nice ? Is it, not ? To, grasp more than most.
You, delve deep into the " unrestrained " approach to " life ", as you see it. Taking on the " ghosts, of misfortune " stimulates your senses. All, of them. You, are transformed into the " caring entity " dispensing " pills " to the less well-informed. They, after seeing " THE NEGOTIATOR " in action, learn more of higher thought, and process. Realizing potential, rather than quasi-disfunctional " anacdotes " to the mainstream conceptualizations.
Powerful interpretative work, comprihending what is " real " and what, is not. Loving, your style. Loving, your way with " words " !!! :) Beautiful " craft " involved to take on, what others can not.
TAKE CARE. It, can be a " ROCKY ROAD ", but, you seem more than capable, in " handling " it. With, passion, as well as warmth, if I may be so bold, to suggest. :)Ā
You post the most beautiful in-depth comments Richard, you really grapple with people's work and look for the intent within. You really would make an amazing psychiatrist if you do not already work within that field. Your name is the next on my hit list of work to catch up with. Thankyou for taking the time to read and comment, appreciated ?
" I DO NOT HIT, HEIGHTS " but, merely, quantify the " message within " the ART. You, do, readily, get the " gist " of my appreciative comments on, " CREATIVE LEANINGS ", I hope. Even, if, you are " up, against the wall ", sometimes. LIFE, MUST BE " TREATED ",Ā as well as shown respect. It, takes " all-sorts " , to make a world. They, are " exposed " to the light, by random " acts of kindness ", through adventurous " displacement " of an artistic bent.Ā :)
NEAT, AND TIDY, " composition " that.....matters. To hearts. :)
Yes, exactly...thankyou ?
You really are very kind Cherie, on this one your kindness is undeserved I think, on rereading I do not feel my words are right, though you are spot on with your observations of what I was trying to convey. I may have to rework it. Thankyou...hugs ?