Poem -

Predator

Predator

It tempts you, the thrill,
it has under control, your will,
You're running, running up the hill,
starving for the last kill.

And so you move, up and up,
starting from the very down as a pup,
Running, running until you're close up,
and striking, fighting your very last matchup.

It's in your blood, in your head,
it looms there, like an unspoken threat,
You've never fled,
in the eye of the dead.

And so you fight, for the pride,
taking long steps, long strides,
Never once you cried,
with only will left by your side.

It's the thing left, when all is over,
it gives you hope, like the last clover,
You're not waiting for the takeover,
and never ever climb lower.

And so your moment, it has come,
hearing the cries of war and drum,
You will take down those in the slum,
letting them cry one last time for their mum.

Like 4 Pin it 1
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Katina Woodruff...

An interesting poem, with a good sense of rhyme.ย 

Favorite Stanza:
It's in your blood, in your head,
it looms there, like an unspoken threat,
You've never fled,
in the eye of the dead.

I can honestly say, Iโ€™ve never read a poem quite like this one. When I first read the title, Predator, I assumed it would be about animal predatorโ€™s like a hawk or lion. I may need to re-read later for clarification. Some poems are like that. When you read them, you donโ€™t always know about the subject of the poem. The only part I would revise is adding more about the โ€œpredatorโ€ is it human or animal?

Thank you.
I enjoyed reading your poems.
ย 

Reply
author
Jennifer

Thank you very much for your advise! :)

Reply
author
Katina Woodruff...

Your poem inspired me to write a poem, I posted today called: Predatory Animals. I name you in the poem.ย 

Reply
author
Delmayne Seekoei

Why am I only seeing this now?
Hey Jen this is glorious!!
Great rhymes ,everything just fitsย 
I love predator ??
Delmayne

Reply
author
Jennifer

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it!!ย 

Reply

Latest poems in Lyric, Romance, Speculative, Tragedy

Poem -

The You

The You

Seldomly sitting alone on mountains and clouds drifting into distances with its special dance to my...

Poem -

Beware The Self-Centered

Beware The Self-Centered

The selfish ones can be unkind
And vile in what they sow.
They don a mask to dupe the blind...

Poem -

La Llorona

La Llorona

Maria, Maria what twas done?
Slain ones babes one by one
Cast in raging river to drown...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com