Poem -

Premature Evacuation

She yelled get out
I hate you
don’t ever come
near me again ..
But then
even before those
words had
begun to register
and the onset
of regret
to hit home ..
He had slipped away
and he left her
with an
intense feeling of
premature evacuation ..

 

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Gwendoline

Clever Nev, heated moments that leave utter regret. Another snippet captured perfectly my friend. You always do such a good job 😊 x

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Neville

Thank you, you really are very understanding Gwen, even the thought of being misconceived is a real turn off for a lot of fellas .. Whereas I just take it as they come 😊 x

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