Poem -
PRETTY DEMISE
I am sorry my love
This is not something I can control
I am sorry my love
As I watch your skull hit the floor
Evil plagues my mind
I am sure you were aware
I fantasized about your demise
I am sure you pretended to care
The blood on my hands begins to dry
As it mats and settles into your hair
You were not even worth my time
It is your fault for being there
© 2014 Valerie Lynn
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Comments
Not cruelty, sincerity obvious. Good poem.
Ravindra Kumar
Ravindra - Thank you so much for reading!
Val ♥
Dear Valerie Lynn,
These above lines are strong and powerful, Thanks for sharing
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
WILLIAMSJI - I truly appreciate your message! It made me view my own writing from a different angle. Thank you!
Val ♥
Heeyyyy Val..:) Its really a great write dear...I liked it..:)
Keep writing
Luv u always
Surabhi
Surabhi - You are such a sweetheart! Thank you so much love!
Val ♥
Dark but delicious piece! Very cool! :)
Thank you so much Sarah!!!
Val ♥
Valerie Lynn,
Congrats on your winning nomination. Well deserved.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
WILLIAMSJI - Thank you so much!!!
I truly feel honored to receive a nomination!
Val ♥
excellent....I see we write about similar subject matter....very well done piece.......Michael
Michael - I know right! Except your poems are way better than mine. I absolutely love your work! Thanks for reading and for leaving a comment!
Val ♥
wow val has a dark side great write congrats x
Susan - Thank you for the comment! It's not as dark as I want it to be so I guess I will have to try and write a few more like this one. Thank you for reading!
Val ♥