Poem -
Projection
Mind, body,
projection.
Thoughts
welling up
from within.
Information
welling up
from within.
Releasing.
Information
materializing
from within.
Releasing
to the
ether.
Into the
void.
Exchanging.
Communication.
Information
moving along,
forward.
Interactions.
Mind, body
image.
Image merely
projection.
Reflection
of the
machine.
Meaningless.
Body, brain
machine.
Information
creating machine.
Left behind.
Information
makes a
difference.
Body dies.
Image dies,
turns to dust.
Information
never dies.
Machines
reflection remains.
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Comments
very smoothly etched ink...well done
Thank you kindly PD
I like the short lines and the swiftness of the poem. The repeating lines and alliteration worked well throughout.Β
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I was once a machine operator for a factory, so when I read the poem I thought about the machines in an industry, how life has changed since the industrial revolution many years ago. I also saw the machine in the poem as a metaphor for our mundane existence at times, how if feels like we are mere robots to the daily grind of life. I could also see how our mind acts as a machine, we receive input (data), then we have to decide how to react to that new data.Β
Good poem, made me think!Β
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Hi KW.
Thank you kindly for your thoughtful reply.
JP