The Promise

I'm a dream, Your a dream, Dreams within dreams, Is what we are.
I'm your dream, Your my dream, Dream of eachother, Is what we do.
I dream of you, You dream of me, Dream together, On everything.
I'm your love, Your my love, Love eachother, For eachothers lives.
If I die, You will die, Your love dies, With my death.
If you die, I will die, My love dies, With your death.
If I go, You will go, So that you, Can be with me.
If you go, I will go, So that we, Can be together.
Together as one, We have become, United in love, We promised us.
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This is supposed to be an 8 stanza poem but I can't figure out how to make it do that. Each period is the start of a new section. Also written to be a song.
Its a nice poem, with a great message as we are all inter connected beings like it or not.
Maybe sir jimmy Arnold can help you with your stanza..
Hi Shirley,
This would be an (8) Stanza (2) liner, from Alicias poem.......Thanks for the props (Lady) Shrley.......
I'm a dream,you’re a dream,
Dreams within dreams, Is what we are.
I'm your dream,you’re my dream,
Dream of each other, is what we do.
I dream of you,you dream of me,
Dream together, on everything.
I'm your love, you’re my love,
Love each other, for each other’s lives.
If I die, you will die,
Your love dies, with my death.
If you die, I will die,
My love dies, with your death.
If I go, you will go,
So that you, Can be with me.
If you go, I will go,
So that we, Can be together.
Hi Shirley,
This would be an (8) Stanza (2) liner, from Alicias poem.......Thanks for the props (Lady) Shrley.......
For some odd reason when posted, hers would not remain stanza form when first posted, hopefully this one will...
I'm a dream,you’re a dream,
Dreams within dreams, Is what we are.
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I'm your dream,you’re my dream,
Dream of each other, is what we do.
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I dream of you,you dream of me,
Dream together, on everything.
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I'm your love, you’re my love,
Love each other, for each other’s lives.
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If I die, you will die,
Your love dies, with my death.
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If you die, I will die,
My love dies, with your death.
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If I go, you will go,
So that you, Can be with me.
Thanks you guys I appreciate it!
You are quite welcome..Thanks too you as well and to (lady) Shirley, (my female hero)...