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Prompt - "When I let go of what I am, I will become what I might be"

Prompt - "When I let go of what I am, I will become what I might be"

When I stop believing old beliefs
new heights I may reach

When I forget old put-downs
soar past them, the clowns

When I choose to only hear the compliment
my confidence will rise in accompaniment

When I let my dreams inspire
Watch me I'm going higher

So if you fully live life
not skim it

reach for the moon 
the skys the limit

No longer "I am what I am"
its now "Look, see what I've become"

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Carey Milton

I hope everybody can aspire to these words Susan..Love it ! Big vote from me x

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Susan O'Reilly

ah thanks Carey the title was a prompt from which the pen came your very kind thanks glad you loved cheers x

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Michael Villamarin

I enjoyed every word as I read..It lead me to believe in myself! Very inspirational, loved it! Congrats..

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Susan O'Reilly

always believe in yourself Michael so liked you liked cheers and thanks x

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Jai Masters

This is my fav poem 

speaks to my heart 

thank you for helping Jai grow 

this is the best self help I know 

truly a poem is a gift 

thank you Susan 

Jai hopes to return a gift to you one day 

:)))))

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Susan O'Reilly

Jai your lovely comment is a gift and your poems and just you being you glad you like this cheers x

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BLOSSOM

A wonderful sentiment Susan and a great write from you, loved these lines

When I let my dreams inspire
Watch me I'm going higher

So if you fully live life
not skim it

reach for the moon 
the skys the limit

A worthy nomination and a vote from me :)

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

I love this verse. Good write, Congrats, Regards

Williamsji Maveli

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Susan O'Reilly

thanks Williamsji Maveli is this the same one as before if it is welcome back x

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Susan,

Yes, the same old Williamsji Maveli. Wishing you Happy Writings in a Happy Year 2104. Greetings of the season. 

Regards

Williamsji Maveli

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Jimmy Arnold

Susan this is wonderful...Every word, is ever so true.....

Jim

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Michael Villamarin

Hello Susan I must of read this everyday.. till now again! Like another message is behind it all waiting to be found! Very attractive poem..Thank you again.

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Susan O'Reilly

michael thanks so glad you like you are very welcome thank you x

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Susan dear

how lovely are you I'm so glad you loved this one the inspiration comed from you as well hun have a great day thanks so much Susan x

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