Poem -
Psychotic or not?
Been 3 days since I have slept
cause of the secrets I have kept.
Will share now my misery from sane to insanity.
Hearing him reminds me I'm not alone with my thoughts
When he's gone. My Anxiety's not
He keeps me safe from the strange devil man that follows
With his sinister face and eyes that are hollow.
The "devil" demon man I see scares the fuck out of me!
The guiding voice says don't be afraid
The more you fight the more he'll fade.
From doctors, nurses to cpns
From angels, devil to demons.
This is a war I can not win. No one agrees what diagnose to give.
Fuck it I'm right the devil lives!
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Comments
This is deeply chilling.
Big or small, it doesn't matter Stacey...you use words to create clear, iconic images and weave narratives with those images in the mind's eye.
Put another way...you're a damned fine writer!!
J ;)
Hey STACEY!!.....I agree with JASON!!... you ARE a fine writer!!..... but ....I just wanted to add this..... the last time I went for three days without sleep....I was hallucinating my ass off!!..... and when I asked my doctor about it she let me know that ANYONE who is deprived of sleep for 72 hours....WILL hallucinate profoundly!!..... so in answer to your title question ~ my answer is NOT PSYCHOTIC!!..... just trippin' HARD!!..... smiles......ALL STARS!!..... cool write!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Brilliant write.