Poem -
"Push"
Darkness succumbs me.
The loneliness overtaking the willingness to push on.
Slits of light illuminate only my feet.ย
With softly pressedย fingers against the wall I feltย a metal knob.
I turn it and realizedย it wont move, it's locked.ย
Every creviceย is a door.
The discovery sends me inย a frenzy.
Every door is locked.
My life filled with doors, but all locked.
But then a voice says "push".
At that moment I do just that.
I push and in an instance
The corridor I was walking inย filled with light.
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awesome pen
great write>>>>5 stars
Great write ! ย :)
Well done Natalie!!...........some VERY powerful phrasing here............compelling read..........and in case no one has said anything..........."Welcome to COSMO!!"...............smiles................T xo
A magical phrase, push, and opens a door, push and a wish is fulfilled, should not be abused and I must say push only in critical moments, push, push, push and everything is arranged, say push the storm becomes calm. A magical poem with hints of hope. A greeting and congratulations on the composition.