" QUEEN ARACHNID "
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Descended an arachnid from
a crook in the ceiling of my
room,dangling on a silk,nipping
its jaws into my neck,paralyzing
venom diffusing in my claret briskly,
mutating me into a pedicel.
Entranced in his alluring eyes ,
persuading to fall prey to the
unbounded love of his enigma.
Spinning webs of temptations,
around me , as the night falls ,
devoting me in his abiding love .
Clinging to the threads,performing
acrobatics rumba our bodies fusing
in together,unnoticed dark powers
of occult realm growing within me.
Transforming into a queen arachnid
with predatory instinct stronger in lust.
Twirling the tulle over him ,encasing
fast ,flicking into the mighty web.
My lethal fangs covetous to infuse
but abrupt cognizance of his mystical
adulation ,crumbling the beastly instincts,
redeeming the love by kissing into perpetuity.
BY
PIUSHA
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Indeed! This poem exudes sensuality. Such raw emotion depicted is such esoteric diction. It is a symbol of mysticism. This spider or scorpion morphs into something capable of seduction. This is a unique depiction. The two became one.
Dear Glenn, I am glad you got the essence of the write..It came as a thought last night when my daughter was getting scared by seeing a spider on my bedroom ceiling...anyway that thought took some other forms when came into verses...
I'm glad you liked it..my deep gratitude friend...
Cheers
Piusha
Thnxxx-Cherie for your kind and honest review..It means a lot to me dear
Love
Piusha
Still the crook in the ceiling???? excellent creativity Piusha.... love it...
Thnxxx for your kind remarks and you know prem-still the crook in here...lol
Cheers
Piusha,
Excellent, creative and fictional write, My applause, Voted 5* , Nominated and reserved for my " POET'S PEN "
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear William I am honored by your kind remarks , nomination and selecting my poem for poets' s pen.Its really funny when i think about this creation ,as my daughter was scared by seeing a spider on my rooms ceiling sat.night..I thought of writing, something about spiders , written something but while editing everything changed as Queen Arachnid made a plan to visit cosmo....lol
Love
Piusha
Leola ,
.Yaa and that spider still here watching me replying to you lol.............My deep gratitude for your kind review,I really value your remarks.I am humbled by the verses of appreciation Leola.Your poems ,art are very inspirational...
Love
Piusha
Great write, Piusha. You caught me in your web. :)
Nikkia this time I m really hungry,couldn't resist you...lol.Thnxxx for stopping by and tempting me....
cheers
Okay I have to say I HATE spiders! They freak me out more than anything so I tried not to look at the picture haha but seriously...this is an amazing write!!! I think you deserve 5 more stars. :)
Love,
Val <3
Dear Valley , oh I know spiders are scary due to their structure and venom .This write was a surprise one, as thought about something and the out put was something different...unpredictable just like life...Thnxxx for your sweet remarks...
Love
Piusha
Sorry My apologies for the error please. Read as Val...android trouble....I m embarrassed. ..
Haha it's okay! I like Valley! ;)
You are so sweet val
A stunning piece Piusha, well done sweety. I agree with Leola a really superb depiction and a great visual story with real depth and very seductive to the reader. Keeps the reader hooked right from start to finish. Well done honey. Love George xx
Oh dear Georgia I am delighted by your remarks..my deep gratitude...
Love
My congratulations on your success in poetry dear sister, Loving Madonna Williams
Thnxxx sweet Madonna, hope you will have a blessed days ahead in life.I am excited to get your remarks on my poem..
Love ya a sweetheart. .
Piusha