Poem -
Question Of Surrender
Did I touch the stars unrealized
Was my kiss potent
Was it inherent
In my carnal capacity
Or just latent possibilities?
Can I see the future
From my crystal orb
Control the birds
As the earth's spin
Controls
The vista of those very stars
That my beliefs
Instill?...
Shall I pour the bloody wine
That Osiris may touch the moon
Or does my potential
Have more
Than a universe contains
Shall I take the olive branch
And offer the gods
My refrain
Or will another be my religion
Driving my desire
As a freight train
Pumping
My taste
For love's embrace
Through confidence
And potential...
Dare I admit
I have
Succumbed?...
'Tis true,
I am yours...
Tony Taylor
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Thanks for the inspiration. Learning each day how beautiful life can be. You have some really good stuff yourself.
Thanx SO much ARTHUR CALLOWAY!!....I DO so appreciate your taking the time with this one..... if you found some inspiration ~ "Even Better"......a pleasure brother poet!!!......thanx again!.....T ?✳✴☀
"Reason lost the battle, and all I could do was surrender and accept I was in love." Brillaint in verse and sentiment Tony
Excellent comment!!..... thank you LOST!!..... appreciate it bro!!...... peace...T xo ?☀✴✳
Hi Tony, great write, loved this lines
"My taste
For love's embrace
Through confidence
And potential...
Dare I admit"
Lots of love and hugs.
That's the same line Cherie pointed out!!..... you know what they....." Great minds this think slot." (smiles)......thanx for this CLEO!!..... oodles of appreciation!!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?☀✴✳
Thanx C!!....yep, it is a different kind of write for me..... the inner turmoil bubbling..... the decision..... and the leap of faith..... at some point.... for a careful person......the moment comes hard...... and with issues in past relationships..... that final "Dare I admit.." moment..... is everything.....I love how you appreciate.....thanx for this Gorgeous!!.....kisses.....T xo ♥♥
I love the total surrender....
Yay!! Thanx your ROSE-NESS!!...... the perfect comment!!..... Love this!!......thanx again!!.... smiles......T xo ?☀✴✳♥
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
Ancient Gods controlled his whim
Osiris filled his wine to brim
But then there came a Damsel true
With the words he sought most, "I love you"
He had never felt such love before
And he felt in it, his faith restored
So he reopened up his heart and soul
To this Goddess again, that made him feel whole
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
You are amazing Brother Poet LARRY!!....thanx so much for this.....I just don't know what to say to these return poems any more except....,YOWZA!!!.....lol......thanx man!!.....T xo ?☀✴✳♥
I looked in Roget's Thesaurus for the synonym of YOWZA. It only had one, KOWABUNGA!
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx