Poem -

Quick Sand

Quick Sand

Have you 
ever felt
as though
you were
sinking
in sand
with nothing
to hold
on to

Awake
sinking
asleep
tormented
with the
realization
you will
eventually
awake

dreams
foiled
reality
pierces
the
oxygen
bag
that 
sustains
hope
faith
a
new beginning

You ever
felt
that
you  might
as
well
go 
all 
in /

then
maybe
finally
it
may
produce
peace
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

When it rains here many times you actually sink and when you lift your foot it keeps your shoe...

People call it clay...

Clay?

I say call it what it is...

It's quicksand people...

?

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Feathers

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author
Dean Kuch

There are few fates I can think of that would be more horrible than drowning in quicksand, Greg.
Being tarred and feathered is one.
Being drawn and quartered is another.
Yeah, I've felt just as you've described here more than I care to admit.
Good write...
~Dean

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author
GREG TUCKER THE...

Thank You Dean.  I think the anticipation of death is the hardest.  Quick sand you know it is coming.

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author
Dean Kuch

Sure, Greg. You're very welcome.
~Dean

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