Quick Sand

 Sometimes I accidentally step
Into quick sand and I find myself
Slowly sinking.
I thrash and panic looking for
Something to grab on to.
To pull me out
But I hear the quick sand yell saying;
"You can't do it, I am too strong
You’re already sinking faster and faster!"
It laughs at me.
My struggle amuses it.
The more I panic and the more IÂ
Try to pull myself out,
I sink further and further.
I let my body go numb; all the
Energy is drained out of me.
I'm not strong enough to
Lift up these weights.
I take a deep breath and
Close my tired eyes;
Waiting for the sand to
Swallow me whole.
But something strange occurs,
As i open my eyes I soon discover
That the quicksand has disappeared.
As if it was never there

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Comments
incredible allegory! I'm a sucker for melancholy metaphors ;) loved it! haha
Wow thank you that means a lot!
Wow....what an ending I too loved this matey! Big thumbs up from me x carey x
Thank you so much!