Rain When the Sun is Shining

I tried to write  a poem
with just me and her
and the rain coming down
from a sunny sky
and not sound pretentious
like I invented an emotion.
And if it's love
I don't even want to know
I'm not looking to find a reason why.
she makes me feel
Good, inspired, horny
All at the same time
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Love this weather scenario !!! :)
Hey Richard, thanks for reading; I don't understand the comment, but thanks for taking the time to write on, cheersÂ
My favourite weather is rain from a sunny sky ! There is the chance of a rainbow ! A lovely poem ! Thanks !
drunkenwolf, reminds you of Bukowski, my friend you have no idea how much that means to me, thank you from the bottom of my heart, Â I love Charles Bukowski and I was thinking about his approach to poetry, you my brother from another is knowledgeable as hell on poetry, and very helpful, you don't just throw out platitudes, from this one comment my confidence has grown more than I can say, thanks man I'm moved and inspired by what you said here.....take care Eddie
The way the sun beams through the Sky like five spotlights out of one sun...
Definitely Chances are Good for a rainbow...
DOUBLE ONES ARE AWESOME!
Thanks Keith...
sparrowsong
I love rainbows, Sparrowsong and Keith says hello, double ones are awesome but not more awesomer than Sparrowsong, cheers and thanks for cool comment