Poem -
Raised by love
It isnt hard to see
How you were made for me
You get underneath my skin
I had to let you in
You are pumping me with life
You cut deeper with your knife
I need you like you are water
Do anything to give you a daughter
A girl raised by a man like you
Will know unconditional love is true
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Comments
You captured the great need for a good father!........................Jim
Very important to have good role models, especially male ones and i completely agree there is a great need for good fathers. Thanks Jim ☺ always appreciate the comments. sending good vibes and light always☀
Holy Cow!! ~ Who ever he is, he's one lucky man!!......your ability to write with perfect tempo and syllabic timing is right up there with great lyricists!!.....It must just come naturally to you because you seem to deliver it effortlessly!!.....the line that sticks with me here ~
~ "I need you like you are water..."
Keep 'em coming dear poet sister!!.....ALL STARS!!......ALWAYS a pleasure!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!
PS. The darn stars aren't working again!! sorry : (
This brought a smile to face as I say I am the lucky one ☺ thank you Tony for your lovely comment as always. You make me blush 😂 lol I just have poetry all the time in my head now, i lost but its back and I'm never letting go. The bad part is when I am not quick enough to write them down *poof* its gone 😂. Love and light to you always ☀❤