Recognition Failed

You appeared right beside me, from nowhere,
a weary old man with a frown
I asked who you were and your blue glacial stare
looked me up first..and then slowly down
A snarled reply came, โIโm your angelโ you said
I did wonder,perhaps - am I dead?
I was curious to know if you really were ..so
with a trembling voice hereโs what I said...
โDont think that Iโm stupid and don't see your game
I donโt think angels look much like you,
If youโre here just to con,
well youโd better move on
and go and find somebody new!
With a sigh and a shrug you gave your coat a tug,
and the garment just fell to the ground.
From a place far away, I heard harps start to play
as the air filled with heavenly sound.
From within a rucksackย
that you had on your back,
was a rustling of unearthly things.
As I looked on in awe
I was shocked when I saw
that attached to you nowย were two wings!
The scowl and the frown were now gone from that face
and replaced with a warm peaceful glow,
and you spoke oh so gently, direct to my heart
saying, โsorry but now I must go..
I gave you a chance to accept who I was, but
your fear made you not see the light,
so my mission has failed,
and my work is curtailed,
so I leave you now as I take flightโ
He flew through the skies, leaving tears in my eyes
as I saw that like chances we lose,
we make judgements each day,
things we do and we say
And so often wrong choices we choose.
Iโll never again turn an angel away
even though he might come in disguise,
Iโll look for the good,
and then maybe I could,
find an angel that I don't despise.
ย

Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Brill
Haha thanks ! xx
Very cleverly written Lodigiana. I hope you find your angel someday.
- Sydย ย
Thank you so muchย Syd..I hope there is an angel for each of us ..and that we recognise it when it appears!
When I was young I did a lot of meditation my instructor told me if an angel were to appear, ask him one question before allowing him in, Are you of the light?. Great poem lodigiana.ย
Thank you so much Gerard!, I am curious...did one ever appear? Iย really do hope soย
Lodigiana xx
I got a lot of visitors, some good, some bad, alot of inspiration, I could honestly write forever.ย
I hope you do write forever! I will look forward to reading !
Hi Lodigiana
Didn't have the time to put a full review previously but I have enjoyed this work very much. Choices are made on a daily basis some right and some wrong but signing up to Cosmofunnel has to be one of my better ones !
Keep up the good work !
Aw bless you ย Kieran! Yes indeed becoming ย part of the Cosmo family was definitely a good decision ! xxx
what a lovely story and message...another one for the books?
Thanks so much Sally..sometimes in life, we dont always see whats right in front of us as we are so full of suspicion and fear..and often we can miss out on wonderful opportunities! Look for the unexpected and dont be afraid..ever! Really appreciate your commentsย :)ย xx
lol it's sarahย but you're very welcome
Haha so sorry Sarah..that's what happens when I try to write without glasses on and think my memory is better than it is!! feel free to call me plonker!!!! xxx
beautifully crafted masterpiece, Ana. Such a treat to read
Thanks so much hun xxx