Poem -

Abyss

Abyss

Reflection.
Viewed
in the
abyss.
Seeing
oblivion.
Look long.
Look hard.
Reflect!
Reflect on
existence.
The point.
The reason.
How to
manage?
How to
preform,
act?
Opportunity
of existence.
Reflect!
Gaze
into the
abyss.
What’s
the point?
What’s
the score?
Impact.
leaving impact.
Abyss reflection.
Reflection
of existence.
Value
of being.
Stepping on.
Judging.
Criticism.
Negative.
Taking.
Reflection.
Look
into the
abyss.
The abyss
reflects.
Reflects
what’s
viewed.
Mirror
of existence.
Look long.
Look hard.
Reflect!
Retribution.
Evens the
score.
Reflect!
Quality of
existence.
Judgement.
Abyss.

 

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The fish of the sea

Wow, at first, when I saw the structure, I thought this would just be another poem, but it just drew me in. So very engaging and just a creative use of words. All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.

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Marion

Nice write John...powerful and thought provoking...??

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Awesome pondering and reflections , very poetic wonderings indeed. Kudos for a great poem wow!!

plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

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