Poem -
Reflection
As I look out the window I see a girl. She looks broken, but you could barely tell if all you do is glance at her. I look into her eyes and I see she's lonely, she wants to talk to someone before it's too late, but no one seems to listen to her. She feels like she doesn't belong here, and no one seems to understand her. My eyes begin to water as I'm looking at my reflection through a window, hoping someone notices how I feel.
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This personal reflective piece showing how loneliness can impact on the spirit is put across in a forthright sincere manner.Β At different stages of life everyone can feel lonely and isolated. It is up to the person involved to seek out friendship which is always there. I have been lonely at certain points in my life but everything worked out for the best. My heart and soul and my beliefs saw me through.
Tremendous write. Wishing you well in all you choose to do.
Take care. Β :)
welcome to Cosmo, wonderful write. Hope to read more of your work soon.
ItatimachadooOO......wow! What a weird name...... what does that mean?........ anyway, I found the write VERY moving and the loneliness shone through powerfully...... but I also thought to myself.... this could be SO MUCH more powerful if you broke your lines differently (just a thought)......I found this piece truly compelling.......ALL STARS...... well done.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo.Β ?
Hello Itatimachado00...
Welcome to Cosmo!Β
Very relatable write...
I am sure many can relate to the feeling sometime in life...
It can suck us in like a vacuum if we let it...
Welcome to The Cosmofunnel!
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ