REJECTION
I know it's hard for you guys to understand what rejection really mean
But sometimes us women is just not interested in those type of things
If you know what I mean
If you see me walking down the street
Minding my own business don't give you
Permission to talk to me especially
If I'm not interested
If you see me ingoring the cat calls you
Making towards me don't give you permission
To put your hands on me
So just accept that I'm just not interested
Please don't hurt me
Please don't hurt me
I understand rejection is hard but
Please don't hurt me
I want to live to see the next day
Living my life of what God gave me
So please don't hurt me
Take the rejection and the cat calls
And keep moving because
Us women is just not into it
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Comments
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Interesting and delightful poem!
You have a great story telling technique.
Is this a poem about how men see you, or have you had past situations that have led you to this realization? I read two themes in your poem: acceptance and growth as a woman.
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Making towards me don't give you permission
To put your hands on me
So just accept that I'm just not interested
Please don't hurt me
Please don't hurt me
To make this poem stand out even more, I would add a few more lines of descriptions, possibly of your surroundings, or more specific details about maybe what has transpired in the past, your encounters with men.Β
Thanks for sharing your poem.Β
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Let me know when you pen something else, or if you decided to make changes to the poem. I would be happy to return and write you a new review and give you a different rating.Β
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