Poem -
Release
I beseech thee unbearable sadness to vanish from my existence.
Pull away from my heart without resistance.
Exit with expedience and take with you every embedded thorn.
Sheath your lethal sword and allow peace to re-enter my soul.
Bow upon your knees so the light can shine over your giant shadow.
Strike not again your dagger through my weary heart.
Banish my being from your kingdom.
Release the shackles of pain and anguish from their stronghold.
Take off this black veil that makes all things remain in darkness.
Unlock this dungeon door.
Lower the bridge to provide passage over the moat of wailing sorrow.
Free this tortured soul.
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'excellence in execution' Cactus Woman, such passion and energy flowing in your words, this is quite a good read, cheers poet
Thank you dear poet for your kind and lovely comment and for your insight and understanding.
You are truly a genuine person of great empathy, love and compassion.
May the good Lord anoint you with good health, favor, joy and happiness.
We are joined in the body of the great circle of the Lord's gift of life.
May you find comfort and strength to continue a long your journey and find great meaning in it.
You've made a powerful poem of a prayer, with audacity and compassion for self and all souls who suffer in the shadows. "... Lower the bridge to provide passage over the moat of wailing sorrow." Wow! What imagery! This should be shared widely!
Thank you daddy!
Thank you for helping me to correct some of the spelling as well.
Your comments are always welcome and I feel very inspired by them.
Love you always <3
soo insightful and eloquent , kind and compassionate my dear.
Thank you for your lovely and up lifting comment.
May God bless you always.