Remember
Jill's challenge "wonderland"

Like 7 Pin it 2Shivered image midst murky loch,
Qualm in mind, probe the dark,
Shattered memories hasten flock,
Mind asleep, heart in hark.Poignant pass twixt the light,
Oiled lamps & cobbled roads,
Pounding hooves, reflect in blight,
Foggy sketch swift erodes.Echoes anon recrudesce,
Crinoline velvet, hair in braid,
Abode midst mead picturesque,
Splintered vignette abrupt evade.Olive drab march in plight,
Angst amongst the fallen many,
A glimpse within subconscious sight,
Rippled waters, a fallen penny.

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Comments
Very good ?????. My favourite line was
Lovely work x
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Thank you for your kind words
excellent verse Bestie! Your work always rocks
Thank you Lisa ? glad you think so anyways ha haΒ
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Thanks Jill ?
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My Dear Simon,
Such powerful verse.Β I was captivated from the first word to the last.
All my love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry I really appreciate your support!