Poem -
REPENT
Like 1 Pin it 1How many ways
To die
DIE
By the
Rock
The dome
:
Die
Die
Dear children
Children
Hungry children
How many ways
TO DIE
DIE
DIE
DIE
DIE
GUN
Shot
Noose
In a poison eyed
Serpent
Slither
Skin
Repent
Remorse
How many
Ways
How many
Ways
How many
Ways
How many
Ways
To Die.
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Comments
Repentance........ always a good idea !! :)
Different aspect to your writing shown here with a force to the words which can alarm or stimulate depending on your nature !!! :)
Seriously, this is powerful indeed highlighting the tragic methods of passing, too numerous in number, that can end this blessed journey. Make the most of life because it is too short. There is so much to experience before judgement day !
Stay committed to the craft !
All the best to you.
Take care. :)
Wise words
Thank you ? Richard
life is indeed short
I write to bring it my own truth
Before my own passing
:)) Jai
:) I should have written " too many in number " ! Still, you get the point of my comment, I hope, and make the most of time here !
LIFE IS TO BE LIVED.
Take care my friend.
Wishing you well.
:).
Thank you
?
This is helpful to know of you
Luv
jai:))
:)
Dig this one man, dig it... \m/
Thank you ?
You know the dark
And light
Your intuition
The poet
In you
luv from
jai:))