Poem -
reprimand .
Motionsickness ,
Pounding sea,
Thy hurricane love,
For thee,
Whirlwind turmoil,
In violent unity,
Display of corruption,
Destructive force,
Annihilation in its course,
Withdrawal,
Withstand,
In loving command,
Thy love for thee
"Forever"
defeated,
Completed ,
In reprimand,
Thy fatal hand.
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Following lines are impressive-
Thy love for thee
"Forever"
defeated,
Completed,
On reprimand,
Thy fatal hand.
Thank you,
Thank you sweetheart, much love to you ravindra xx Nardine xx
Nardine,
The power in your pen poetess, can easily be confused, with the entity you have described in your poem of power, (Reprimand)....You have arrived on this site, like that of a (fearful) torrential storms approaching arrival, yet yours, be the arrival mark of all things (Good), in its waking path...Be it through poetic awareness in your impressive poem delivery, or the lovely art work, which you have,(without a shadow of a doubt), displayed and Mastered, to its present perfection, such as in the designs and mind set, you have placed, on the shirts here at hand..A very fitting title, for a wonderfully constructed and conveyed poem.. (Job very well done)…
Cheers,
Jim