reprimand .

Following lines are impressive-

Thy love for thee

"Forever"

defeated,

Completed,

On reprimand,

Thy fatal hand.

Thank you,

Nardine,

The power in your pen poetess, can easily be confused, with the entity you have described in your poem of power, (Reprimand)....You have arrived on this site, like that of a (fearful)  torrential storms approaching arrival, yet yours, be the arrival  mark of all things (Good), in its waking path...Be it through poetic  awareness in your impressive poem delivery, or the lovely art work, which you have,(without a shadow of a doubt), displayed and Mastered, to its present  perfection, such as in the designs and mind set, you have placed, on the shirts here at hand..A very fitting title, for a wonderfully constructed and conveyed poem.. (Job very well done)…

Cheers,

Jim