Poem -
Requiem Of A Revolutionary
The day they came
To earth
At first
Co operation
Let them
Do as they please
Must appease
In contemplation
We just let them
Do as they pleased
Received no
Compensation
Doormats and
Coat racks
We served
For conciliation
Laugable, for humans
Always aim to control
Though when
Odds are overwhelming
They are quick to
Remold, reshape and reform
At a price shh...untold
I'll shake the clouds,
Move the stars
Revolve and
And revolt
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Comments
This is intense brother!!..........I found myself revolving around the History Channels informative and hypothetical episodes on Aliens.........I don't know that this was the intent of your write..........but with all considered I couldn't get away from the thought...........regardless.........I got an amazing feeling of portent..........and a creepy feeling of the possibilities and potential avenues for humanities evolution.........I Loved it my friend............this is so well conceived and beautifully delivered.........all around compelling write Onlooker!!............ttyl...........T xo
My intent for this write was inspired on the idea you proposed but also ok the idea, or the thought, "what if aliens came to earth" with more advanced technology, we'd probably be quick to work around their ideals most likely out of fear, that was just a thought that contributed to the conclusion, anywho thanks brother, stay curious :)
CO