Poem -
"RETROSPECT"
A deep space within me
I believed to be dormant
Where thoughts of you
Run like rivers through my mind
There are times that I howl
Then I fade away
Because you are a window
In my world made of walls
A vein that carries
The ferocious drum of my heart
Beneath my scarred skin
The anthem of the forest
What if I proclaimed
That death comes before birth
That we stand on the sky
And look up at the earth
Reflecting on my nightmares
My weaknesses are like steel
Love from a distance
Is so easy to kill
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Comments
O, wow! This is superb! That first verse grabbed my attention and pulled me in to read more. I don't know what verse I like best, each one is so well written. This was a pleasure to read x
Thank you for reading Being Me, glad you enjoyed it
Wow, Wolf, this is such an interest poem and taken in a different direction from others along the same line. Such a well written and overall clever poem. I enjoyed reading it all. All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.
Thank you for the pleasure of you comment, and love the name "The Fish Of The Sea"
Awww, thanks so much for your kind comment, glad to see a fellow animal on here lol. Again much enjoyed. All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.
Us animals have to stick together lol. What kind of fish are you btw?
Ha so true! But I don't really think one fish, more like a Collective of Fish, like a school or a mind, gives me a sense of connection. Although haven`t given it that much thought. What kind of wolf do you associate with?
I admire your way of thinking. A school of fish it is. And I consider myself a Direwolf
Thanks and Interesting, yeah, that would have been my guess from your poem. I would be interested in having a look at your other writes too! All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.
You are more than welcome to peruse my page poet friend, all the best to you as well Fish ?